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 Assessment of Authentic Writing Products

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Bill's audio reflection on his work

(a note about authorship)

    Assessment of Authentic Writing Projects

 

This entry explains student performance on a major writing project in the course.

     

What I did and why.  Students completed a major "authentic writing project" in the course. I use the term authentic to distinguish these projects from run-of-the-mill school tasks (e.g., a term paper). An authentic project is one that has a purpose that goes beyond satisfying the teacher's need to evaluate students and give them a grade. Many school tasks have narrow purposes and exist only in schools. In their personal and work lives, people do not write 10 page term papers just so their bosses or family members can determine if they know anything. People do, however, write reports, give presentations, write letters, argue and discuss and so on in order to deal with real issues and problems that involve other people.

 

I created 8 types of projects. Students could select a topic or issue of interest to them, apply course material to the issues or problems, and write to an audience other than the teacher. For example, students could select a controversial topic in education (e.g., the use of ability grouping and tracking), and write a position paper. In conjunction with the paper, they also wrote a letter trying to persuade a decision-maker (e.g., school superintendent, principal, etc.) to adopt their position. Another type of project involved developing a "parents' guide" that recommended ways that parents could enhance their children's learning and thinking.  See "Authentic Writing Project" in the appendix for descriptions of the project types. In addition, all students participated in a peer review in which they critiqued one anothers' completed drafts before the final paper was due. Each student brought two copies of their papers to class, and exchanged with students who had the same type of project. Thus, each student completed and received two reviews by the end of the class period. See "Peer Review Guidelines" in the appendix.

 

How it turned out. I thoroughly enjoyed reading these projects. As a group, the quality of writing is quite good. The projects are well reasoned and coherent. Only 5 out of 38 papers were mediocre (i.e., contained one or more serious problems in reasoning, coherence, scope, etc.). Students selected the full range of options. I am especially impressed by the serious interest expressed in the projects. For instance, students who

    wrote parents' guides

    created actual pamphlets or brochures

    position papers sent letters to the President, senators, and the local superintendent of schools

     conducted interviews visited with teachers from their past who had a significant influence on them

    were involved in tutoring during the semester

wrote detailed case studies of their progress and problems with their students.

 

Students found the peer review process very valuable as well as difficult. They appreciated the opportunity to read others' papers and to get constructive feedback from peers. By and large they claimed that they feel inadequate to evaluate their classmates papers. However, the evaluations of the reviews (i.e., each students evaluates the two reviews he/she receives) are positive. The average rating for all of the reviews was 4.1 on a scale of 1(not helpful) to 5 (very helpful).    

 

What I learned and what I would do differently and why. This authentic writing project marks somewhat of a shift for me. This is the first time I have used this set of project types. In recent years I have drifted away from assigning major papers. I have been dissatisfied with the quality of big "term papers," and have felt that I cannot provide sufficient guidance and feedback to enhance their quality. This particular assignment forces me to consider some reasons why my previous assignments were unsuccessful. One possibility is that I over determined the papers by specifying topics and format. My intentions have always been good. I want students to explore and analyze certain issues and topics in depth--and analyze them in the ways that I would. Essentially, I have given students little latitude in terms of investing themselves in the project. Instead, I simply gave them elaborate school tasks to perform. I am trying to revise my views on these types of learning experiences. I am working against a very strong urge to control students' work. I would like to create opportunities for students to pursue topics and issues that really matter to them, and to create contexts for this learning that are connected to the kinds of work that people really do.

     

I am very satisfied with the range of topics and the way that students engaged them. Some common problems occurred with certain types of projects. For example, some students observed and analyzed classroom teaching for their project. In some cases students only observed a limited range of teaching and it became difficult for them to write extensively about it. In the future I may restrict this option unless students can observe more than one teacher on several occasions. I intended for students to develop a coherent, purposeful set of questions, explore their teacher's responses in light of the material we had covered in the course. Some of the interviews were poorly constructed. In these cases, it was difficult for the student to connect the teacher's responses to course material in a meaningful way. I may need to provide more direction in creating productive interview questions.

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